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Now I dont care what you think or how your words flow.
From your lips, you, yourself taste bitterness. Throw it out the window.
Get rid of the trash you know and start off new,
with something religious or maybe something original, coming from you.

How about Love? How about the true willingness of a person?
How about dedication and remembrance of a fairytale-fiction?
Why don't I make my own story, with my own bare hands.
A relation from the ground up, starting off strand by strand.
Piece by piece we will build an everlasting puzzle.
With millions of tiny pieces, just waiting to be shuffled,
then
placed directly where they belong.
In the back of your mind and in the front of your heart,
you create a masterpiece, never to be apart. Never meant to be
lost. Never meant to be broken.

Author's Note

i honestly cant remember what this was about because i wrote it so fast

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Ah! This is very random but again I agree with the fact that sometimes, our best work comes from random work like this.
So, I found it very thoughtful...like the entire way you used "puzzle" as a symbol and then how tactfully applied it to life.
"Never meant to be broken." - Loved this line, it is very straight but yet concluded the entire piece very well!

Well, since you haven't named it yet...and as such I'm not at all good in naming too :D
But how about these - "Mending a broken puzzle" , "Never meant to be broken" , "Unbreakable", "Mending lifelines" or simply - "Everlasting puzzle" :-o

[Andie]

Too bad you can't remember what it was about, but I really like it. I love how you used a puzzle as a metaphor for I don't even know... a heart?