December Eyes

Just a poem

Your December eyes
Cold as the lonely moon
Stare right through me
A shadow in the dark
No choice but to
Disappear
I watch
Close enough to touch
As your cold shoulder
Freezes
And I'm left wondering
What's the point

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. Gave the December cold place and vision.
"As your cold shoulder
Freezes
And I'm left wondering
What's the point"
I did like the above lines. Honest and to the point. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you, I really appreciate it! It felt good to write it out instead of holding it inside

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and you are welcome.

[Celie Rose]

I like your poem. Brings to mind, a cold and empty soul. Emotionless with nothing inside. Cannot be consoled, so what's the use of trying anymore. Good job. Keep writing.

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you, I'm happy you liked it. "What's the use of trying anymore" is exactly how I felt when i wrote this