Nonsensical Nonsense

Nonsensical Nonsense

A Poem by LapseOfMind
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Yeah, I don't know. I wrote it in about 7 minutes. It doesn't mean anything.

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There is no weight to this world
An Atlas charlatan I demand
Too much time to play favorites
Not enough time to command
Spoken over the lonely
An evangelical tool
These words are just nonsense
Uttered by merely a fool
An alphabets uprising
Continually committing this chore
Wasted space on blank paper
Yet always coming back for more
How long can this linger
Shouldn't it come to an end
There's no reason to tamper
With an empty mind and a pen

© 2016 LapseOfMind


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Nice flow of thoughts led to good ending.
"There's no reason to tamper
With an empty mind and a pen"
I did like the above lines. Empty mind and a pen need a kick-start. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I really appreciate that
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Okey let me just say that the topic is out of place because this is not nonsense at all, this is good. I really loved it, poetry that is written very fast normally comes out very good. A mind is never empty, we can even write about how empty we feel, that is the beauty of poetry.I enjoyed this one

Posted 7 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)
Originally I took issue with the seeming lack of a coherent structure, but upon reading this through several times, it reveals itself to actually be quite an intelligent use of words: a hopeless writer struggling to overcome writer's block.

I am truly impressed. You've achieved one of the hallmarks of masterful poetry: obfuscating meaning in plain view. Good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

7 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate it! I was unsure if anyone would actually catch it. The words kind of just p.. read more

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Added on June 16, 2016
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LapseOfMind

Seattle, WA



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