Arms of Solace

Arms of Solace

A Poem by Larry Dyson
"

of the olde Irish brouge,a lifetyme away

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Arms of Solace

 

E’re aye be-mourn the wail of a bairn…

Held in mums arms of solace..

Ne’r  to sup nay feed upon.

For the harvest be gleaned..

The fields bare of tare.

Hush a bye My child

The next world is ferr ‘ye.

© 2011 Larry Dyson


Author's Note

Larry Dyson



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Sweet sadness .. a tear-full good bye ..

Thank you .. Jasmine

Posted 12 Years Ago


I adore this. Reading in that dialect is magical, as our your words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your words transported me to another world... a world across the waves... pain released in a mournful lullaby... Deeply moving.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This pains me...don't know why...it made me think of the following Utube video. Have you seen it?

http://www.thesun.co.uk/sol/homepage/news/4028938/Heart-attack-boys-br-moving-YouTube-farewell.html

Posted 12 Years Ago


What is there to say; I haven't the words.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh Laury, thank you for pointing the way to this sad, sad tho beautiful lullaby. Its phrasing is clearly and strongly past Celtic, the sound of each word read aloud is near tiptop mournful true.

All it needs is a softly played fiddle or Irish harp, maybe both .. and tears would flow, dear friend.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


it's a cold hard world upon the truth of it, and so many boughs were broken

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Posted 12 Years Ago


such a breath of fresh air with the heir of something crafted from perfection and timed to whistle of an old presence deep within you...amazing stuff

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Funny---I can't read this without employing an Irish accent. (In my mind's ear, it's perfect, too) I'm being silly, of course. It's a sweet one.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


How perfect for this season...it seems to me like a lullaby just for Christ...the child meant for the next world :) Lovely!

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Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 27, 2011
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Larry Dyson
Larry Dyson

Tomball /Magnolia, TX



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WARNING!!--- my writing approaches Mature most of the time, read with caution if you are concerned ,or so WC thinks? - I'm a retired southern woods walker..who writes and lives modestly..I love n.. more..

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