"Please answer
if you can show
me your eyes
behind your mask"
Now that my friend was a brilliant ending. So many times we end up judging others so easily. Assuming that we really know the real person inside, only to find that actually we know nothing about that person. Some people are married for years and still have no clue who that person is that they are married to.
Loved the fact that you brought in those questions in your 3rd stanza, somehow forcing your readers to pause a bit to fully understand the depth of your words and where you are taking this. Questioning one's mortality in such a thought provoking way.
"Please answer
if you can show
me your eyes
behind your mask"
Now that my friend was a brilliant ending. So many times we end up judging others so easily. Assuming that we really know the real person inside, only to find that actually we know nothing about that person. Some people are married for years and still have no clue who that person is that they are married to.
Loved the fact that you brought in those questions in your 3rd stanza, somehow forcing your readers to pause a bit to fully understand the depth of your words and where you are taking this. Questioning one's mortality in such a thought provoking way.
What you see is what you get with me, I've been writing poetry since I was like 17 years old. Been writing on and off for 11 years now. I'm working on my first book at the moment, hope to finish befor.. more..