All or Nothing

I suppose I understand
Why I have some confused -
I either am cold to the touch
Or icky sweet to you

If it's real, you'll know for sure
Ill turn you into art -
1000 lines of sing-song rhymes
Is the inside of my heart

If that's not the case, you may not know -
You'll never see me leave
I won't pretend, lie, or bend
My emotions just to please

So if it's true, I'll take the leap,
May stumble or may fall
Because I either love with all my heart
Or I do not love at all

- l.r.

Reviews

[Gee]

Not a fan of the first verse but from then on a well written piece

[Joe W]

This poem is incredible. Has an amazing flow and there's a lot of stuff in here. I really enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you.

[Leo]

Smooth flow especially the last stanza and last two lines of it nailed it and gave me the rush I was hoping for..well done!

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Gregory Stires]

this poem is really good, the way it flows is natural and doesnt stop . i like how in the poem you tell that your not gonna change your emotions just for people and that youl stay true to your personality. it also kinda reminds me of how by changing how i acted to people i fooled them to think the fake me is the real me but the real me i only show to my friends and sister whom accepts me for who i am. my family sees the real me as a bad day hopefully when i get out of the house and on my own i can start to just show the real me instead of the mask i crafted.

[Lexi Richard]

I hope that you can find the people who will truly accept and appreciate you for who you are, everyone deserves that. Thank you for you comment.

[Annie Nicole]

I really like this a lot, i like the way it flows, great job! : )

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Tasteless Heart]

Very well composed, a pleasure to read. Great poem!

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you, I'm glad you like it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Old wise saying. "love and hate. A heart beat apart".
"Because I either love with all my heart
Or I do not love at all "
Love is fair. Need two people wanting the same things. Thank you Lexi for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Jess]

Awesome!!
God I can relate to this.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.