You have no wright to brag or complain

You've already thought before "It could have been worse" you don't know the position your in aren't you? And yet you always demand more, asking for raises extra credit, does it even work most of the time?Your mind can never be satisfied for what it already has you already have, always risking fate to get ....nothing most of the time, when you ask for that mean teacher for your cell phone back what does he(she)do? Tells a joke, smiles, and puts it in the drawer and gets back to teaching, begging has never actually done that much has it, begging a criminal to not kill you, asking for a raise, or asking your parents to stop the punishment. And after that there you start complaining something that also is pretty useless. Has worked after you were a kid? Even when at worse your complaining has never help. Unless it the grandma of what your complaining about its not going too work. Its obvious that they or it has already made a decision like a normal person you apparently can't take the decicion seriously thus you end up doing what could be a lazy attempt to change that decision and will that decision will never change.....ever...

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[Delmar Cooper]

You've already thought before [ ] "It could have been worse" [ ] you don't know the position [ your] in [aren't] you?

A piece posted for reading by other writers that begins with three or four grammatical errors in the first sentence and an error in the title probably won't get much attention. This is most likely a translation issue. That's understandable and can be overlooked. But, give your work an even chance and make sure the beginning is perfect.