the broken gaint

random i don't know =D

 hello beautiful frozen girl
give them the cold shoulder
just like you always do

the world means nothing 
in the palm of her hand
they fall to their knees

they beg for mercy
her eyes frozen
heartless

the world fell to their knees
in the presence of her broken heart

Reviews

[Bran the Broken]

short and simple, but surprisingly effective in its harsh, sad tone. good job!

[Silvario]

Very nicely written. I enjoyed this piece. Short and sweet with a little punch at the end. Nicely done. :)