Transendental Meditation or Waterfalls Delight

Boredom often comes unbidden

How shall i paint thee? In colours of bright lightening Spirals of golden mist forever tightening, And how shall i love thee? In shades of peppermint pink, When the shapes that surround me are losing their ink, May i inspire thee? To take out your brush, and draw me a rainbow dipped in jasmine's bright fire, Drown me with your fragrance and lucid desire. Under waterfalls labouring shower I bid thee goodnight In this your finest hour

Author's Note

Dont ask, I dont have the answers

Reviews

[MuSe Ampoule]

Look at you...writing such a piece! Amazing. I read this through twice and got two different perspectives/feelings/moods. Brilliant. I read it the first time without the notes and thought 'Wow, what a beautifully sensual piece!' then the second time I read it with the notes and felt it dripping with sarcasm...Oh bordom..."how shall I paint thee" with bright colors and lovely stimulation. Nope, you defeat me.

Fantastic piece!

[Tasha]

This was truly amazing. I read it a couple of times and I really liked it. It doesn't matter that you don't have answers the only thing that matters is that you came out with such a beautiful piece.
&heart;s Ta'Shandra

[Thea Fuentebella]

how shall i paint thee? tis such a well worded masterpiece.
nice. i imagine this being read by someone with a deep/ bedroom voice...
because it's alluring and the metaphors were awesome!

why don't you have the answers? :)

[JanieB]

Nice write. Very dreamy.

[Poetic Beauty]

The descriptions are amazing and there is a hint of longing and a sense of desire in this poem.

[An owl on the moon]

You paint such brilliant glimpses of beauty and humanity in your words.. golden shimmers of light and softer peppermints.. colours that bring about tender emotions... May you paint your world with such words, friend poet.

[xjust-for-me.x]

love the imagertary

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. It someone could figure out the emotion of love. Would be best selling book ever. I learn after 20 years of marriage. Better to be positive and say nothing negative. I like your description and ending. A wise person knows love is rare and need the tender touches of calm and peace like the words in your poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Jesse N. Wall]

very nice wordplay.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is beautiful!!! god! I LOVE THIS!
what a picture you paint! so peaceful!