Bathing in the Light of Orali

Shades of Annabell lee, by E.A.Poe--------I may have spelt that wrong.

How many times shall I bend my knee
to the beautiful
Orali

She moves like a shadow in the night
does the beautiful
Orali

When love grows old
I shall live by the light of my wonderful
Orali

She holds me tight
when the arrows bite, does the wonderful
Orali

Now Orali is a woman bold
beautiful through and through
she loves me though I know not why
thats my beautiful
Orali

And I shall bathe in her light
by both day and night.

The light of Orali

Author's Note

This may well be the last poem I write, Maybe. time for me is running short, to all my friends here, i wish you all the very best and thank you for all your sweet words, yours as always Linear

Reviews

[LovelySparrow]

Beautiful imagery in this piece. Bathing in light- such a small phrase yet so powerful :)

[Jasmine]

don't leave, we need more genuinely talented writers on here...

your imagery is beautiful.

[Poe Redd]

Oh, you cannot leave! Such beautifull poetry would be missed terrably! I love Poe so much! And I love this poem just as much!

[Adelia Alighieri]

This is really good, I hope you return soon. Best wishes. =)

[claudia1201]

hope its not the last..its beautiful

[Liza]

where are you going Linear? hope it is somewhere lovely and worth leaving :)
you will be missed...

this was a lovely dedication -

[Dinesh Sairam]

Sure seems like a compact tribute to Poe. Even when 'Annabel lee' was semi-nonsensical, this write of yours is good, all cliche, feel-good words and stuff. And you're not leaving.. Just Keep writing.

[KAREN]

Beautiful well written poem! Hate to see your work of art and you leave!

[xjust-for-me.x]

Excellent poem..

[Ladysue]

oh this was so astoundingly beautiful! You are a very good writer and would be missed...great work...