WC's Battle Cry

A cry to arms echoes creatively

Spreading across the mythical realm

With visionary general OT at the helm

Imagery flies across the white screen

As stunning talent burst at the seams

 

While Muse passes secret messages

To each member in the poetic war

Swords slashing popularity at its core

Duplicate profiles will be torn down

Imagination the victor wearing the crown

 

Genius metaphors fall from the sky

As monroester thunders his booming voice

Where reading crapocalypse is a choice

Slinging slimy words into the daunting night

Allowing brilliance to soar in flight

 

A claymore wielding poetic beauty

Swings her words across the page

At inconsiderate teens, with fire and rage

Dedicated writers take a verbal stand

Stabbing with pens and notebooks at hand

 

We are here with ideas to convey

Not to cheat and bribe our way to the top

This multiple personality profiles must stop

Battle screams for love of the word

Resound our passions need to be heard.

 

 

 

Author's Note

there are many I wanted to mention in this poem but that would have taken forty pages so simply know you are all thought of as talented.

Reviews

[OT]

hahaha! how did I miss this!! lol brilliant!! we gotta take it for our own - an inspiring war cry - to get us all pumped! and I appreciate the name check lol and musey passing those messages and the monroe-monster just dropping bombs left right and centre haha!! this was so good! also I don't get why people down-rate EH's reviews - must be those d*****s you noted lol!

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

This is really an awsome piece of work here Beauty. I love the last two lines they are perfect. xo

[Bubo]

Intelligently done!
You have voiced many reasons why I am not here as often, years ago this was a fabulous place to be, many have now left, which is sad ~ because this was once home for all of us ~ well done.

[I Am Svetlana]

We all have our own voice and need to express it if we expect to be heard. If we want to be heard, we have to take the risk of coming out of our box and PUT OURSELVES OUT THERE. Make ourselves get noticed by someone, anyone at that. We just want someone to hear our deepest, saddest cries and our lost stories of who or what we used to be and how we could be better. We all want to change, but can't do that without helping ourselves out first.

[KAREN]

Thanks for the poem. It is a very good creative write.

[Bare Bohemian]

Name dropper. ;)

[Ladysue]

excellent meter in this well expressed piece...

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Brillant Poem! The flow was awesome and it was an enjoyable creative read!

[Tina Kline]

This is great, so very well written and very creative.

[E.H. Monroe]

This really made me want to actually go buy some sort of battle axe and run rampant in the street, half naked, yelling blasphemies and shitting in mailboxes.
You manage to, without draining it in weak transparent images, tell the story have it make sense and STILL create something seperate than just a poem.

Bravo..now about those mailboxes...