Untouchable

just a short poem about wanting someone you will never in this life be able to have.

you are untouchable
and yet my fingers
uncurl and tremble
and crave for you

Reviews

[Dewberry]

I love the style of this piece, it is so short and simple. It reminds me of those short poems you find on social media.

[♥ Kinnixk]

I love this. I feel this way about a guy at my school... :(
100/100

[pumpkin head]

So wonderful and passionate

[Legolas]

I like this poem Kate. You dont need to say very much to get your point across. Great job!

[Kate]

Thanks, Stephen! :)

[Alm]

Wow. Me likes. This is poignant in all it's melancholy. I love the simplicity, and how you never really say how you feel directly, but with the actions.

[Kate]

Thank you, Alyssa. Your review is so poetic. I love it. Hahaha. :D