Not my Fairytale

I wrote this a while ago. Let me know what you think.

When the world seems bleak
The nights are long and you can hardly sleep
They’re nothing that I love more
Than to hear your voice
I know there is another you can love more
Another one you can hold and adore
I can not stay here and fight the tears
I am not happy, as it appears
I will not let my heart go up in flames
I will not play your stupid games
This time I’m gone for good
I somehow wish that you understood
That all these years of running around
Now I stand and break down
I love you now like I loved you before
But this is not the fairy tale that I had hoped for

Reviews

[lovejulez03]

Bravo, I really enjoyed this poem. It shows how you can put together something so short and to the point but with such powerful meaning behind the words. Well written