My Chub Chub:)

My Chub Chub:)

A Poem by Livenrite
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This poem came out of my imagination...no I'm not 200 lbs. :)))))

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Growing up at home
the food is very healthy
we buy expensive produce
'cuz my family's pretty wealthy
100 lbs.

Now I'm getting older
I'm always at my friends
studying 'til late at night 
the eating never ends
125 lbs.

Now I'm studying abroad
the candy's very cheap
I look into the mirror
and all I can do is weep
150 lbs.

How'd I let this happen?
To get into this mad habit?
I can't stop this overeating!
my love handles? you can have it!
200 lbs. 

                                             
                                          not to be continued...

© 2010 Livenrite


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i love your sense of humor!
very entertaining and funny :)


Posted 13 Years Ago


:) K, that is really well written! I love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


nothing wrong with it! just not healthy for the heart if there's no limit to da cookies...;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


hey,

whats wrong with being big???
im a big girl...

there aint nothing wrong with it, i love it!! :D

*pulls out cookies* SEE!!!
*noms cookies*

Posted 13 Years Ago


Clever and humorous, i liked te unique play on words,
you did an excellent job. i thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


hehehe so clever

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wooti whoop !!! *eats cookies*

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 17, 2010
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Livenrite
Livenrite

Brooklyn, NY



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I am Lieba B.W. and this site is my sanctuary:) Love being a part of this writing community and I hope you enjoy my work:) Cheers! more..

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