If I were to

There are a lot of ifs in our lives

If life is a dream

Then dreaming is our life

If we fall asleep at night

Then we wait for the sun to shine

If before the universe

There was nothing

Then what exactly is nothing

If before time, time didn't exist

Then was their a time where time didn't move forwards or backwards

If life is cruel and not perfect

Then a perfect life would be a cruel joke

If We lived deep drowned in sadness 

Then we're wasting every second of our life

Well, what do you think? the one who's reading this?

Isn't their a lot of "Ifs" in our lives? Ifs that probably won't get an answer because they are to far away

If I was the one to choose and think what is life or what really am I, I wouldn't know what to choose. 

Simple as that, We have two options, choosing and making a decision is far more complicated than that and dreaming of doing something is awesome and cool but waking up from that dream and really doing those things you've always dreamed of is actually... not hard at all. 

If I were to say the humanity is a retarded race, then I would be wrong and right, because we do make a lot of mistakes, but we also learn from those mistakes and keep moving forward to know the real "Truth".

If I were to think that my life is horrible and full of sadness, then I would be wrong because there are a lot of people who have really tasted sorrow while I only taste a sugar that isn't sweet.

If I were to develope feelings for a person, then I would be a human but if that person doesn't like me, then I would feel sad right? Well, that is life isn't it? failing at love a lot of times until you know who's the correct one.

If saying I'm sorry a lot of times is good, then it is good, but if you're saying for things you haven't done, then you should rethink. 

If I feel sad..... Then I feel sad and numb.... Because I fail most of the time..... Because maybe people don't accept who I am..... 

If I were to pay attention to those dumb stuff, then probably I would be sumerged in a sea of thought were a big fish would try to eat me, and the big's fish name is "sorrow numbness". 

You see, there are a lot of "Ifs" in our everyday life, maybe you get an answer maybe you don't, but you should try to fight for the truth. An If can stop us from doing awesome things. But also saves us from doing retarded stuff. 

So I tell you, Do you want to drink water? Because writing this made me feel thirsty 

Reviews

[Double~Curse]

Wow...this is deep. You're an amazing writer

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[andrew mitchell]

A great write to ponder on if's . If only the human race didn't make mistakes and often than not we learn when its too late. If we really could see what is really going on and witness first up from the destruction of Brazil's forests to someone being tortured, someone being murdered or an animal suffering right now there would be more what if's a mind could not bear. We are a savage, cruel, greedy race. Very scary. A great write by the way.

[Lizardo]

I agree with you, thank you so much for stopping by and reviewing :)
If we were just... a little different, it would make a big difference.

[ANTO]

It took me ages to free myself from the loop I got tangled in from the first two lines Lizardo - thanks for that ! ;p

"If life is cruel and not perfect
Then a perfect life would be a cruel joke" - I really like your thought process my friend.

"If I were to say the humanity is a retarded race, then I would be wrong and right..." - loved this

Nice bit of suggestivity in the last line. Do you need to pee - dont think about peeing Lizardo - my word, my reviews are getting stranger ! lol

[Lizardo]

hahahahahahahahahahaha xD okay that made me laugh xD don't worry ANTO xD
Anywas, thanks for the awesome review :) I really appreciete it coming from you :)

[ANTO]

xDD .................. have a good evening Lizardo

[Lizardo]

To you to ANTO, to you too

[weatherbee]

IF.... what a tormentor. If you let it, it can really drive you mad. lol
I enjoyed this piece because it got me pondering several different ideas at once.
Thank you for sharing. Keep writing. Good stuff.

WB

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much

[success]

thanks for the share...very remarkable piece

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much :)

[Melinda McQueen]

You put a lot of thought into this. You made some interesting points. It was a nice read.
Thanks for sharing.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much for visiting and leaving a kind review

[closed]

lol
the last part was funny

i like how you can be serious
but then you don't take yourself too seriously either

it's a kool trademark you have as an artist

welcome back
and thanks for sharing


-Dream

[Lizardo]

Thanks Dream :)
I'm glad you liked this one, and yeah, I sometimes like ending my thought-stories in a serious way but most of the time in a sataric way because, while reading something drepressing or num in a story, there comes a funny thing that makes you like more the story, Did I managed to do it? xD
Anyways, thanks Friend, I'm glad you liked this one :)

[closed]

I'd say you did
and np^

[Cool Girl]

Sometimes I swear we might be twins xD
Only because that sounds exactly like something I'd say!
I think that we think alike, which is good :)

Anyway, I really like this!
I often think about the "ifs" in my life.
But we must not think like that too much, or we will never fully appreciate reality.
Great write, Lizardo! Nicely penned :)

[Lizardo]

I swear I think we do xD
Thanks CJ, I really appreciete it :)

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome :)