Less and less

When i lost you
I lost a part of myself
I have been losing parts
For a long time
Feeling less and less human
I have began to wonder
If theres something wrong with me
Or is that just me
I hold on by a thin tread
For with out that tread
I would be dead

© 2016 Lord of mad men

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Howard Savage

Losing love is a devastating affair, and I can comprehend how one can become devalued. When one put his or her all into a project to find that the individual was not as devoted as you it chip away a piece of you, causing you to wonder if people can see you are a broken individual. Great writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much! Loves not the only thing one may lose to break them. But is is one of the easie.. read more

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Natalie-hs

This is brilliant.. "I have been losing parts" .. Brilliant.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Karmee

I love the feelings in this one, Been here before.

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Howard Savage

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much! Loves not the only thing one may lose to break them. But is is one of the easie.. read more

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Added on September 4, 2016
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Lord of mad men

The void., PA

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I am broken I am scarred I am twisted I am burned I am corrupted I am warped I am distorted I am me After all this time? Always...... I was born the first day of the tenth month of the ye.. more..