Water everywhere

This just came to my after a heavy rain when I was working on the farm

Water water everywhere

 

Down my neck and in my hair

 

Driping from the celling

 

Running down the door

 

Pouring on my sister, who is barely four

 

A drip dropped the cat

 

A a drop dripped the dog

 

And now I sit here wishing

 

That it was merely fog

 

 

 

1st place

Mar 14, 2015

 

• Limerick, Acrostic, & Haiku
• Water everywhere

 

 

 

Funniest

Feb 20, 2015

 

• Funny Poems
• Water everywhere 

 

 

 

Honourable Mention

Dec 21, 2014

 

• Nursery Rhymes (for age group 5-8)
• Water everywhere  

 

 

Author's Note

Just sort of funny

Reviews

[Nitesh Mahabal]

hahahaha.... Reminded me of my journey with my sibling on the way back home from school on rainy day.
so observant of u to find a way to pen this down

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you it just came to me when I was working

[Maglia Weaver Twill]

nice rhyme for children or children's book genre, raining cats & dogs, who is not mesmerized but that?

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Yeah I was hoping to get it into a children's rhyme book one day

[Konigin]

^.^ This is cute! :) It made me smile. I like the rhyme and your flow was awesome!

Wicked pen Lorna!!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Oh thank you, I'm so glad you liked it

[Konigin]

Welcome! :) It really was awesome!!!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

*Blushes* well I wouldn't go that far

[Konigin]

I would! :) You've got some TALENT girl!! ^.^ Don't ever stop writing!!

[Surya pradha]

a very simple, cute poem. liked it!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you so much

[Sami Khalil]

A very good rhyming lullaby. I think you have a typo: Ceiling. Excellent...:)....

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I am glad you like it. Oops :S I will change it, thanks

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......