The Coolest Season

in remembrance of my dad

That breeze permeating my silky dress

That scent sweeping by my curvy hair

That autumn playing out a magic spell

That season unfurling a cooling breath

 

That you and me stand barrier free

That Nature wraps us in its gentle arms

That Time begins losing momentum

That you've come from a land afar

 

This space in my heart

This still moment expands

To hold you dear again

Before the season steals away

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Your poem is such a loving tribute to your dear father, Louisa; every word is beautiful but the following really touches the heartstrings,

'That you and me stand barrier free
That Nature wraps us in its gentle arms
That Time begins losing momentum
That you've come from a land afar'

[jacob erin-cilberto]

This made me think of my dad and just how much I miss him.

thank you for this poem, Louisa,
j.

[Louisa Chan]

Thank you Jacob.
Hope all's well with you, and that Autumn brings you joy and peace.
Your friend,
Louisa