nothing works

I try to tell

I try to do

And I still get ignored

I scream so loud

You never hear

Is this a curse?!

I want to be with you

You can’t even see

Now I’m going back to my old routine

Let us go

Away

From this city

You can always drive

And ill take you anywhere

Dear, I just wanted to get away.

 

Author's Note

just amde it up !:) hope you like it !:)

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

Some of your lines hit me because I can closely relate. Sometimes it feels as if the whole world is against you, ignoring you and at times running away seems like the only solution. I know sometimes getting away does seem to be a good thing. ^^* But also fighting back is another option I am willing to take if the situation is worth fighting for.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

very interesting Brenda, as if you were pushing away and pulling someone close at the same time.......very well penned!

[Chris]

making it up is easy... giving a piece of you is what is difficult... and strangely -inside "made-up" are always pieces of us. Sometimes each piece can even be tasted and understood.

Chris