a plea for a friend

a plea for a friend

A Poem by brenda

 

Stop the fuss and go on

Don’t think too much

A headache you may win and it may weight a ton

Look at yourself

Realize that you value a lot more than what you think

Inspect yourself and you will see.

 

Don’t hide too much your inner self

You are more worth it than any of them

Fight for what you believe in

Blood you may get from all that kicking

 

Your strong muscles can support it

They tell you can not do it

But get up show off to them that you can!

 

Many years have passed

Yet you still have those black memories tainted on your soul

Cheers up do not let them get to you

They were wrong and they may pay the price someday

 

Now quit that fuss and go on

Because you see the world is yours

And it lay in your palms

Do not ask questions, do not think other wise

Because, you do have the world in your hands,

 So make it happen and believe in yourself.

 

 

You can do anything you wish

Don’t look down on yourself

You are worth more than any gem

Don’t scrutinize yourself

And see the positive things in you

Because, I have seen them when I first met you.

 

© 2011 brenda


Author's Note

brenda
for marley white !:) thanks coyote for helping !:)

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Need a strong ending. I like the pace of the poem. Need a powerful statement to show the reason why someone is important.
"You are needed.
See what you can do.
The world is your drawing board.
Allow the world to see the beauty of your smile and life."
Thank you for your always strong poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is so nice ..
i enjoyed reading this :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A sensational heartfelt poem, terrific stuff :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Need a strong ending. I like the pace of the poem. Need a powerful statement to show the reason why someone is important.
"You are needed.
See what you can do.
The world is your drawing board.
Allow the world to see the beauty of your smile and life."
Thank you for your always strong poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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brenda

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