Like A Thief In The Night

Like A Thief In The Night

A Poem by Luissanto
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Written by Louis Saint Verges

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Like a thief in the night

She stole my soul

She filled my heart

and made me whole

She touched me in ways

I cannot describe

We made love with our souls

We made love with our eyes

The warmth of her body

lying next to me

broke the chains of my bondage

and set me free

I never knew love

or how to feel

till she laid in my arms

and showed me what's real

for years I was empty

for years I was alone

with no one to love

or call my own

now she is here

and my heart she does own

no more reason to wander

because my heart

has a home

 

© 2018 Luissanto


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What a heartfelt, moving, lovely tribute to the one who has captured your heart, lifted your soul, and completed your world.. In the midst of the darkness, the despair, the cold empty loneliness, the bright light of a healing spirit can feel like such salvation.. It can remind us what it feels like to live again.. To breathe fully, to FEEL deeply, to want to wake up every morning just to see their smile, get lost in the comfort of their embrace, and to experience what life can truly be like with someone we love by our side.. IT can make those broken pieces feel like they fit again, like we are once again whole and have purpose... Sometimes it does happen like a "thief in the night" when we least expect it from somewhere we never thought to look... This is truly one of life's surprises that shouldn't be questioned--just cherished like the blessing it is... You have captured this beautifully here.. It flowed like the whispers of angels into the heart and lets it fly away on the wings of love... very nicely done sir... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This is very heart driven and romantic. Definitley feel the painful encounters of the Words itself

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Luissanto

9 Years Ago

Thank You for your sentiments and taking the time to read my words.
It touches me deeply whene.. read more
Dicy Peters

9 Years Ago

Most definitley deserving
A love like this is good to find.
I call mine my HERO. For I'd surely be somewhere else had it not been for him.
Well done, thank you for sharing this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Luissanto

9 Years Ago

Thank You for your kind words... I know what it's like to find your soul mate
and its wonderfu.. read more
Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

:-)
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I'm so tickled you're publishing these now...this is really exquisite Luis, so earthy and full of heart.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luissanto

9 Years Ago

Thank You so very much, I owe it all to you and your inspiring advice.
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

I'm thrilled somebody finally listened to me, now if that would only work on my kids!
A relatively new poem but one of my new favorites. So well worded and well presented. I wear my heart on my sleeve in my poetry and you can probably see how it appeals to me. Amazing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luissanto

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for taking the time to read my work... and your inspiring words.

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Added on July 9, 2014
Last Updated on September 13, 2018
Tags: love, relationships, romance

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Luissanto
Luissanto

Woodside, NY



About
My name is Luis Santos Verges and I have a passion for graphic design and writing. It is my belief, that poems are inner reflections, "Soul Tattoos" that are meant to live forever. This grou.. more..

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