Dreamer

Dreamer

A Poem by Sophie
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a one-liner

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I want to live a life worth living.

© 2012 Sophie


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Sophie
reviews please! (only if you want to, it's one line, how much could you possibly write?)

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What a nice pair! Dreamer and then life...and a life worth living that is.
I wasn't expecting one line, but after i read it, I feel like I should've been. It just worked so nicely together and I really liked how you represented it. I just feel that every Ike someone thinks about their dreams, or is actually considered a dreamer, this is what comes to their minds. Great job Sophie:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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What a nice pair! Dreamer and then life...and a life worth living that is.
I wasn't expecting one line, but after i read it, I feel like I should've been. It just worked so nicely together and I really liked how you represented it. I just feel that every Ike someone thinks about their dreams, or is actually considered a dreamer, this is what comes to their minds. Great job Sophie:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the title. I think with all your writings you have the same small font. Maybe you should experiment with making them larger?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sophie

11 Years Ago

It's weird I type all my stuff up in Microsoft word at times new roman 12 point font I don't know wh.. read more
Nice thought.... simplicity never fails to impress :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple yet beautiful lines for a simple and beautiful poem


Posted 11 Years Ago


I think that you could take this line and turn it into a really fantastic story or a longer poem. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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simple but elegant. i love it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Me too! Short but great! 100/100 Love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think that sentence speaks louder than any five paged poem could. It is so relatable, and so simply well written.
I don't really have any words to describe how much I admire such a simple sentence. I completely agree with it, and love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We all want it or at least should. Good job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That one line means so much! (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


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