just a question!

just a question!

A Poem by luviva
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this is just about those organisations that fool around that they are helping those affected by disasters,children, yet they are not. they are ripping off people not all of them but some of them are.

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so are they the good people

setting out to help,

salvaging through wreckages

searching for the remaining

souls

 

they go to great lengths

trying to help.

different organisations, formed to help

bring back hope to those lost souls

but all i ask is... is that all there is to

it?

 

are they the real them?

are those their true colours?

is there any hidden agendas

behind those..

smiles?

 

so i hear of..

warchild, AVID, CASA,

KABOOM, save the children

and many more being...

created.

 

they are all great

their work has been felt..

all through the

world.

 

but is that all there is to it?

its just a...

question.

© 2012 luviva


Author's Note

luviva
i didnt really come out here to criticise these organisations and am sorry if i have angered anyone in the process. but there is a question to be asked. forexample the invisible children kony 2012 video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y4MnpzG5Sqc about children affected by KONY IN UGANDA. those were proper lies... i am ugandan my self and those kids featured in the video are proper grown men now.. ht they are using it to rip people off....! am just saying en read, love it en review.. criticisms welcome

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it a shame when you need people to watch people to watch people...just so the right things are done

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

i know//.. only if people have the drive of self motivation to do the right thing,./!
Its true though. I think we need to be more critical of these organizations instead of just accepting everything they claim and say

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

i know... but the thing is that they have blind folded us with their lies that they r helping.. yet .. read more
Hello Luvivia, In Uganda, there are so many gruelling statisitcs about children who do, tragically die through malaria adn malnutrition whic counter the stories of corruption also...a complex and contriversial matter here indeed, your poem does raise pressing questions, thanks

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

u r welcome and i knw that there are lots of things going on in UG, lots of disasters taking childre.. read more
This is a beautiful piece. Very strong meaning. I like it.


Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

thanxx
I agree with Beautiful Dreamer - never be sorry for something you are passionate about. Great piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

thanxx:)
i like the passion in it never be sorry about how you feel Luviva! this is great :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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luviva

11 Years Ago

thanxx for the review en for the hint :)
beautiful dreamer

11 Years Ago

mhm :)

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luviva

KENT, Gillingham , United Kingdom



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