I AM

this is about the planet, conservationsists should love this

                       I am,

                       thats all i know.

                          because I am!!

 

many resent me,

many can not stand

my presence

BUT I AM!!

 

And because I am,

you all live.

you don't realise that!

of course because...

you all simply live!

BUT I AM!!

 

you toss me round

play with me

and I let you, but remember

that it's me

and after all that,

I AM!!

 

you have done all you can.

to stop me from living

but why??

when you know that

I will be back!!

because I dont die

because I cant live you to

die.

 

for I mothered you

eversince you started living

so, because of that can you

give me a little bit of respect??

 

you put up a good fight,

burning the green, which i send to feed you

the rivers are all polluted..

when i cry, you rejoice...

but remeber you are putting up

a great fight!!

which you are to loose.. and i will win.

because i lived before all of you..

and i will live after you are all gone!!

Author's Note

i dont know about this/... there might appear to be spelling mistakes bacause the keyboard did the talking... just ignore the grammer and enjoy!!!

Reviews

[kelvin]

very good prospective on this read here Nature in all things in it will not die she continues to recycle herself when human do silly acts such as destroying bodies of water, littering, and forests and fires but in time she regenerates and back to life she comes sometimes even stronger.natural disasters are her way of baptizing the careless acts of humans cleansing and purging herself from the ones who do such destructive acts. but yet there will be more fights to be fought for her even when we're gone but as she regenerates and come back there will be more humans stepping up to doing the same acts against he till a change is made. this is a very powerful message to the ones who do the destructive things to earth. good read keep writing fellow writer

[luviva]

wow.. that was a great motivational review!!
you got the wider view of it better than those who just "love it"
thanxx for the review, its real appreciated!!

[khalid]

mistakes are too inferior to be mentioned anyway. i liked the pride in this nice poem. what i understood is that this is earth talking to the disappointing human race. i think earth has the right to say this and so much more since we are doing all this to it. and she is punishing us from time to time, sometimes the punishment is severe like tsunami and of course the global warming which is threatening the whole world. i liked how you repeated I am, to show the pride and self confidence...
thank you for the great poem..

[luviva]

thank you so much!!
it is such a constructive review and maybe i will try more of nature poems because am not that used t them.
but thyat is real encouraging!!
thank you again!! :D

[khalid]

my pleasure..you deserve more

[David Scott]

Yes dear ... There is some work yet to do...
Enjoyed the concept.

[luviva]

thank you!!

[Tarry Franck]

I agree with DrD - delivered the message strongly - job well done. Enjoyed reading it.

[luviva]

thankss tarry'

[Tarry Franck]

My pleasure :)

[DrD]

Another of your message poems that deals with what we should all be dealing with every day. Well composed and structured, it delivers the message strongly and with ease. I like that you do not try to decorate your work with extravagant words. In eveyday language you tell us your story and this was one well worth reading.

[luviva]

ohh thank you so much!
actually you are right. i dont bother about vocabulary and ryhms as such...
but its the pen that does the talking!!
thanks my friend for the review. so much appreciated

[}Echo{]

I like this. :)

[luviva]

thanxx:)

[}Echo{]

:)

[Siren]

Quite a creative take on the role of nature in the life of a human. I really liked it. Great write.

[luviva]

thankss so much!!

[Siren]

always welcome (:

[Frieda P]

Love 'when I cry, you rejoice' btw :)

[luviva]

thanxx

[Frieda P]

Mad mad earth! I love this....it's a message we all need to be reminded of, you did it so eloquently....nice work.

[luviva]

thanxx for tyhe appreciation
real appreciate it!!