having a little chat with MISS 2012 and MR 2013

this is just a poem about the new years...

ok,
how should I say this??
MISS 2012 without hurting your feelings?

you have been a great and wonderful year.
but as we all know you are now past.
and we should always look forward.

am so sad to say

this,

but you have outlived your time

and you have to be gone....

don’t be sad!!
I also once welcomed you..

remember??

we also had some great moments,
so now let’s welcome our new comer
MR 2013!

here he comes..
with yet another set of adventures for us.

blessings, aspirations, achievements
and so much more.

but as I once told MISS 2012,
That I had to commit her into GOD'S hands
I also tell you, that I will commit you into GOD'S hands
because he guides my life and everything that I do.
I reassure you that with HIM, we will achieve tremendous things.

SO I COMMIT 2013
INTO GOD'S HANDS SO THAT IT CAN
BE SUCH A WONDERFUL YEAR FOR US ALL!!

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

well i dont knw hw this came about bt it just did..

Reviews

[khalid]

very nicely penned. i liked the idea and the way it went on. frankly, when a new year comes, i have to ask myself, what i have done during the previous one. i never say this year was good or bad simply because the years divisions is man made. a year passing simply means the the earth has completed a circle around sun..

[luviva]

that is another great angle to look at it from..
thank you for that insight my friend!

[khalid]

always my pleasure..

[Ahmad Cox]

I really love the idea and the playfulness of this poem.

[luviva]

sankiyu!!

[Frieda P]

Very unique, I'm not very religious but I still enjoyed it. By the way why did you make 2012 a woman, and she had to be the one to leave? ;-)

Happy 2013!!

[luviva]

because women always dont want to get out of the show!!
as in.. they always want to be the center of attraction... so thats why 2012 had to be a woman..

[Frieda P]

Why I oughta..................

[DrD]

What a creative, original way to welcome the new year. For that alone I appreciated this work and applaud your effort.

[luviva]

thanxx so much doctor
i real appreciate it!

[scripted]

talk about out of the box... i love it nice piece!!! yours truely danielle (scripted)

[luviva]

ohhhhhhhhhhh danielle,
thanxx so much real insipiring!

[StayAnchored]

I like your creativity! I agree with giving this next coming year to The Lord!

[luviva]

thank you,

[StayAnchored]

Your so welcome! :D

[patricia]

Great stuff! Like how you made 2012 female and 2012 male, and the handing over into your gods hands both the old and the new was a great reminder to us all. With him or her running the show its just gotta be the best year ever. Love your imaginative write. Happy new year from Trish.

[patricia]

oops that should be 2013 for the male. sorry.

[luviva]

thanxx trish D. actually, i used 2012 to be female coz of the famale attachment to show en all that!! they dont want to go off the glamour and the center of attraction. but thanxx for the review, real great stuff!!

[David Scott]

The best way to begin again...
Thank you for the blessing.

[luviva]

and thanxx for the review my friend!1