the tan so perfect

the tan so perfect

A Poem by luviva
"

well the miami lovers should go to sahara for a better tan...

"

 perfection is the only option

in this sun baked oven.

overflowing with supplies

supplied with generosity.

 

who says that the tan paradise

is Miami?

not only that, Essex the suppliment source

to the acquired tans.

 

oce upon a time

people thought

     sunny sandy beaches the tan

paradises.

 

how about the

dry dusty deserts?

 

You see...

you never knew what i was on about.

but guess what?

now you know!

 

its the dust tan with the

finishing effects of heat,

concealing the tan forever

just like a seal, apact!

"THE DUST TAN"

© 2013 luviva


Author's Note

luviva
well i got this from a documentary filmed in th deserts, watching those people being dust coated just made me write this. i dont know whether there is in there an educative message but all i can say.. is enjoy! and if you can find one, thatas perfect.

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I like the orange spray-on tans better !

Posted 6 Years Ago


luviva

6 Years Ago

lol you never know till you try...
the dust tan might be better
Paul Seaman

6 Years Ago

growing up on near the beach, I do enjo the taste of sand !

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Added on February 21, 2013
Last Updated on February 22, 2013
Tags: climate, culture.

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luviva
luviva

KENT, Gillingham , United Kingdom



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