game over

game over

A Poem by luviva
"

i dont know what this is about but i just felt oblaged to write it.

"

game over

sweety just hand

over your armour,

because its over for you

 

and who says so?

you bet

you think you know me

but not.

 

never give in

and never say cant

coz even impossible

is actually

" IM POSSIBLE"

 

SO,

JUST NOT YET

KEEP THAT CELABRATORY DANCE

FOR LATTER.

 

 

© 2013 luviva


Author's Note

luviva
well.. make ov it what you can coz i dnt know what its reaally about.
critisms r welcome

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I think that you meant 'later' rather than, 'latter', other than that, this poem reads like it has been written by a person with expereince, passing on words of confirmation and cautionary consolation, good work

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

thanxx sheema.. n the spelling blunder thanxx for rectifying them

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luviva
luviva

KENT, Gillingham , United Kingdom



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