life is a roller coaster

just life n its dramas

life is a roller coaster,
that's what i hear many say.
when life takes a different turn.
a completely different course.
seems to fit at the time.
But what many seem not to
notice is that, during
the roller coaster rides,
there are moments of cries and shouts
of joy and pleasure as the rides picks
it's way to the highest speed.
those moments are the highlights of life
that need to be highlighted when
describing life as a roller coaster,,..
for Life has got different experiences and moments
worth remembering.

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

What a clever mix between the philosophy of life and roller coaster riding, although I must admit that I am kind of, big, dramatic theme park -ride-phobic! Regardless, this is as ever, really generous, thoughtful writing from you :) Well done.

[luviva]

THANK YOU SO MUCH... APPRECIATE YOUR TIME AND REVIEW

[Lily Mae]

The moments when you quit breathing out of sheer beauty and total excitement :) Many beautiful experiences to remember on the roller coaster of life..xo :)

[luviva]

always appreciate the thought of passing by...
So thanxx for the sincere review XX

[Paul Seaman]

I believe you have a good analogy there. The rollercoaster in on a path, a track that repeats its self over and over again for each new (or repeat) rider... It the track fate, in your poem, is the track the decisions we make, are we the track, the car, the rider... I know, everyone tells me I think too much, but this is a nice metaphor, and one that is often used in verbal parlance...

[luviva]

well join the club.. when i wrote this poem i was thinking more from the Celebrity kind of life.. them guys who always moan how life is hard for them not knowing that their hard bits are the soft bits for other poor low living people/... so it was more like telling people to be appreciative of what they have!!

[Paul Seaman]

yes, they cry all the way to the bank...