Can you see the wind?

Can you see the wind?

Or ever felt her whipping force and grinned?

Can you taste your voice?

Or swallow sweet songs regarding rejoice?

I still search to glimpse the breeze,

The ravishing colors dance with ease.

I still search to taste my voice,

To savor the sweet and salty noise.

I can’t see the wind, yet I know she’s there.

I can’t taste my voice, but I can hear.

So once more I ask of you,

If ever you feel so blue.

Can you see the wind?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Stu. T.H.]

What a lovely poem, and certainly an inspiring topic to write about.
Thank you for sharing.

[Kim S.]

I can’t see the wind, yet I know she’s there.
I can’t taste my voice, but I can hear.

Love these lines here, this is beautiful

[Chris]

Yes - and it makes all the difference in how you walk your paths. Look deeper, you have a good insight.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Hi I love this it’s beautiful so ethereal
Well done !