Out My Window

Just a poem about what one can see looking out their own window.

Looking out my window, through the roses

 

I long for you

 

Looking out my window, through the pain

 

I hope fo you

 

Looking out my window, through the rays of glaring sun

 

I need you

 

Looking out my window, through the darkness

 

I pray for you

 

Looking out my window, through the light of day

 

I cry for you

 

Knowing I'll never, see you again

 

Out my window...

Author's Note

Another poem brought over from my other profile.

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

Nice, a sweet poem.

[sarah]

This is amazing I love the progression of the colors great write!

[Short.Nerd]

I love this. It's a wonderful write. Great job:)

[Tim]

The last lines took me by surprise. I can feel the wheels turning in your head the more you gaze around at the different things you've mentioned. Then the last lines really put it all in perspective. Great job.

This I like .... I see this certain glow coming in through the window that I look out .
Great write.

[JanieB]

This is such a beautiful poem.