Sunny Days, Rainy Nights, a Haiku

a double haiku

Cloudless, sunny days
Summer will be here soon; the
Sun will give way to
Cloud filled nights, raining
Begins, starless nights, drizzle
Clouds leaden more, damn

Reviews

[Daydreamer54]

I agree, during the summer we gets lots of rain. well some places don,t but where I live it's been that way recently....great write.

[Keevan]

Haikus always have that edge of mystery around them. I really enjoyed this, great write.

[WriteWiz99]

Thank God for summer!

[sarah]

I love the cloudy rainy weather this is a really great poem I always have a hard time reviewing haiku's but this great!

[Muse]

This sums up the weather here in Iowa perfectly. Short but sweet and to the point. :)

[Tim]

I love rainy nights personally. I like the way you brought two haikus together like that. I usually seperate them but I suppose there's no rules that say you have to. Nice work.