Forest

Forest

A Poem by To be scene To be heard

The sweet smell of honey suckles consumes me.
A light breezes laughs in my ears.
Dark green grass tickle my feet.
I brush my hand lightly.
On the rough bark of trees.
Picking near flowers with the other.
Bright blue sky's with not a cloud in sight.
Listening to the soft sounds.
Of creatures coming to life.

© 2012 To be scene To be heard


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I'm curious to know what inspired this. Was it the honey suckle or the soft sounds of life? Or any of the other wonders of nature?

Posted 7 Years Ago


To be scene To be heard

7 Years Ago

what inspired me was really the forest behind my house and how happy and full of life it is.
Loved it :) Very well done with providing us with vivid images, it's like a photographic album and the theme is the forest, also i loved the synesthesia in verse 2, not two senses but even three, that was very well written !! =D

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a very nice poem. I love the forest and your words as well!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dark green grass TICKLE(S) my feet
sorry, awsome poem I love how you can write such supple poems formed around nature and you use landscape pics for everything including your avatar

Posted 7 Years Ago


Thank you for the amazing poem. You took me to the forest and all her beauty with your words. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


I can hear the birds chirping! This is so good!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Awww, birth of life! I love it... it feels so peaceful to me when i read this.
I love your imagery dear! Stunning poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


amazing very interesting too i like it alot

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is fantastic. Once again, your imagery is incredible and I love how light and happy the poem is. Great job. :)
-Aud

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is really nice to read, one of those pretty poems that create a bright world of colour, texture, and life! good job, I enjoyed it (:

Posted 7 Years Ago



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