Chcolate

Chcolate

A Poem by Madelin

 

 

Life is like a giant chocolate bar

Its something you love

Something you enjoy

 something that you should take your time with

Something that you don’t want to run out of

Something that the more you get into it the more you love it

Something that surprises you

Something that you should never give up

Love you life

Because like chocolate it is amazing

© 2009 Madelin


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This is so true, i love chocolates too, but cannot compare my life with it, unfortunately, as chocolates don't bring sadness and despair ... You brought up only the positive sides of it

Overall it was a sweet as chocolate write :PP

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's such a cute poem! And true, too.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Madelin
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