Happy?

 

I am happy

No doubt abut that

 

Or is their?

 

Is my smile just their to fool you

Is my laughter their for you never to find out

My true feelings

 

Is this all just an act

Am I just being happy for you never to find out

Find out the sadness

Find out my anger

 

My true feeling are being blocked by

My smile

My laughter

 

So am I truly happy?

Reviews

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This reflects my new poem 'For an Optimist, I'm Rather Pessimist' and the concept is the same ~ We all smile, and laugh to make everyone around us happy, we take life positively, but deep inside we are not happy as we hide our true feelings behind a smiling mask. And it's even harder to be so optimism about life when we know nothing's alright
Things i guess you should edit to make it flow better:
2nd line: it's about' instead of 'abut'
3rd, 4th and 5th line: change 'their' into 'there'
Great write and great message passed on
Well done!

[Adam :P]

excellent

[Bud]

First, you must define happy. It's not what we conventionally are led to believe. Sometimes, we have to redefine happy, adjust it to our lives so that we may experience it... Excellent poem.

[Melissa Kesead]

Great job. We all hide our feelings sometime.

[Katherine]

Only someone truely close to you and knows you very well can answer that. Even sometimes they cannot. To find someone who can tell, is a person you should keep. I know exactly how you feel. Nice write!