What Has happend

 

I know your weak

It says it all in your eyes

Your eyes tell me you are scared to love

Scared to let any one near the real you

I see tears ready to come out

But why do you hide that behind your smile

You tell me is because of everything that happens

Your eyes have lost that glow of happiness

They are filled with hate

They are filled with sorrow

 

 

 

What has happened to me

All these things I can see in my reflection

Author's Note

dont mindgrammar errors.wrote this is 5 min..leavehonest oppinion

Reviews

[Kaeru]

This had a lot of feeling and it was well written but somehow it didn't really pop out to me. I needed more because it felt unfinished. I don't know, I probably won't think 'Wow, remember that poem I read earlier?' about this one. Sorry, you asked for my honest opinion and this is it. I don't mean to be harsh.

[Nia-Cheyenne]

i feel this so much ..i love it!the feeling is perfect for imagery with your words

[deeps]

Wonderful poem of feelings.
Well said I can feel this.