Rhys's Surprise

Rhys's Surprise

A Poem by Charley
"

A poem about a boy who lives in a dark world with some others. Some people get "graced" by wings- Black Beauty, Cloud White, or Speckled Brown

"
Unfolded beauties,
A feathered surprise.
I keep them hidden;
We’re among spies.

2 intricate fans
Rest upon my back.
He enters my room,
An awestruck Jack.

I fold them tight
And turn around,
Only he saw
‘Cause we’re underground.

Jack blink for a second
But then smiles.
He understands-
Remembering Kyle’s.

He leaves, not
A word spoken.
The others are asleep,
Not to be woken.


I have been graced
With Black Beauty wings,
In a world cursed by
Spies and Kings.

© 2011 Charley


Author's Note

Charley
I was studying my baby chickens' wings and i found that i really like how they look and feel. So, i wrote this poem...maybe to be part of a longer collection of poems or a story...i don't know

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Interesting. Like with your other poem, pictures, you should continue it

Posted 13 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

118 Views
1 Review
Added on March 30, 2011
Last Updated on March 30, 2011

Author

Charley
Charley

Lafayette, CO



About
I love writing stories. I often have ideas, but they don't all get onto paper. Most of my stories remain unfinished, but I'm hoping to change that. *update* November 2015 I wrote a whole novel.. more..

Writing
Introverted Introverted

A Story by Charley


Daydream In Red Daydream In Red

A Chapter by Charley