Simple

Simple

A Poem by manchilld99
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This poem describes the way I feel and the way I go about writing, poetry writing , in particular, but most importantly about living life, itself.

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Simple

 

Simple.
Strive for simplicity.
Don't stretch authenticity.
Use one word ‘stead of two,
not five when two’ll do.
'twill ease my brain
if you’ll only refrain
from being too smart.
So, just ’fore we start,
let's make a deal,
and keep it real
simple.

© 2010 manchilld99


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I will now write you a complicated review of this, hahahaha. If only it WERE so simple! The fact is, it is, isn't it? If you boil it down. It's just what it takes to get to the boiling point! This is fantastic because the idea of not stretching authenticity is what KEEPS it simple. And that's brilliant! Ok, I used five words instead of two ... sorry, but I'll keep this in my mind for next time. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is very well said, i like this

Posted 14 Years Ago


Yes :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simplicity is wisdom but simplicity can also be stupidity. Anyways good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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manchilld99
manchilld99

rochester, NY



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I write poems and stories, and have broadcast a blues show on the radio since 1982. I am from Harlem, currently live in Rochester, NY, but have been around. more..

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