ECHOES STING

I dreamed, you dreamed, they dreamed.
I smiled, you smiled, and they smiled.
I cried, you cried, they cried.
Same pattern, same emotion, different direction.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Leigh]

A quotation like poem. It uses simple language to deliver a big message, very clever

[InsanityWriter]

Deep. ;) Nicely done. (:

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks I.W :) I appreciate your review.

[Eddie Phillips]

Simple poem with immense meaning.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Bro. I appreciate your precious time, I will visit your work soon :) thanks a lot.

[Eddie Phillips]

My pleasure brother. I always enjoy reading your poems. I will always make time to read them.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

The feeling is mutual I enjoy also your Poem, I have 1 of your poem, my fave. it is marking in my heart that a good poems of yours it is a moving one. Thanks brother.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I am just writing for a month and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank you, I love you all.

[DIVYA]

Makes great sense to me. Same things just done differently have varied meanings...Very effectively worded, the repitition works and how!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Div. :) love your review always :) thanks a lot.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice use of Anaphora here.
Keep writing :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Dhaye :) glad you drop by :) thanks a lot.

[Carnation]

I like the use of repetition, and the last line sums it up well.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Angel :) thanks for dropping.

[Carnation]

Also, I just realised this but isn't the past tense for "dream" dreamt. Dreamt dreamed I don't really care, dreamed does sound better though.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yeah I actually I used it first but I found it out of tone so I consider dreamed.

[Carnation]

Yeh, dreamed does sound better. English can be so confusing sometimes *sigh*

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) thanks again

[Gerald Parker]

Verbs do do that, don't they!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:)

[Gerald Parker]

Dreamed is also correct.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I used dreamt first, but I find it not in the tone, so I pick dreamed thanks Sir Gerald.

[Gerald Parker]

Pick Puck. Picked Puck. Not very Saudi, is he, Puck? Not very Filipino, either. What's going on, Marco?

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Puck is a mythological Fairy or mischievous nature sprite. Puck is also a generalised personification of land spirits. :) He is a male fairy in the Prairie but he dies and the fairies sad.

[Gerald Parker]

Yes, I know. He lives near me, in jolly old England. Do you know what a male fairy is? Be assured Puck did not hang out in prairies. He preferred meadows and woods. Do you know why Jesus wept?

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

He hang ones there is a lovestory I am working with puck and the fairies that why he died because a lot fairies love him and he is alone. lol

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

once i mean lol

[Gerald Parker]

Jesus wept because of all the emails.

[Gerald Parker]

Where's the anaphora?

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

What u mean with Jesus?

[Gerald Parker]

Ignore it. It was a silly joke about the number of reviews, messages etc. flying round the world. He would have wept.

[Frieda P]

Sorry but Jesus has his own emails flying around at the moment....

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) I am confused lol

[Gerald Parker]

Sorry, Sir Marc, it's just that over here and over there, some of us exclaim 'Jesus wept' in moments of stress or uptightness.

[revalatia]

that little number packed a bigger punch than expected.. rock and roll dude!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Dude :) glad you like it!