Kwiat

sorry that my English is not very well. I speak as third language and still learn very much.

 

Beautiful sunrise

Awake my day

Bringing me happiness

That I have life here

And family again

The outsides are magnificents

The garden

Awaits a shower

With loving water from the skies

 

Kocham ciebie, mój kwiat.

Reviews

[The Archangel Gabriel]

"The outsides are magnificents" should be "The outside is magnificent."

"sorry that my English is not very well." should be "sorry that my English is not very good."

"That I have life here" should probably be "That I have a life here"

I know that English is not your primary language and am just trying to help. This poem was actually pretty darned good, especially for not speaking English as a native tongue. That must be extremely difficult.

The images were great!

-Gabe

[garrett]

thats very good

[garrett]

your making me sleepy

[Karen666]

great poem

[Kat-Marie Berti]

Very nice poem, even if there are a few spelling mistakes, I enjoyed it very much. I agree with what you wrote, sunrises always bring me happiness too :)

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Cute poem

[JC Fox]

This was a beautiful poem despite the fact that English isn't your first or second language (even those of us who do speak it as a first language don't even speak it well), I loved the flow and all and all a great poem!

[Wolfwind Words]

This was beautiful! The images were so fresh and clean. I could imagine the rain coming down!
Great Write!

[TamerQtaish]

Well for a person that doesn't know much English you sure have your first pretty nicely written there! Its a bit short if you ask me, but hey you can work on that!

I just wanted to welcome you to the site and to tell you, its not about how many words you know in English or any other language, as English aint my first nor second language too, so just keep your chin high and do your best...

All the best,
Tamer Qtaish

[__Flaw__]

Ok...not a bad try, keeping in mind English 's ur third language, and u are still in the process of mastering it :))) And was that polish at the end? I am just guessing :)))
Carry on....cheers :)