Remebering What Inspiration Is

Remebering What Inspiration Is

A Poem by maryjaneuy
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about our moms. :)

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On that day
In bed I lay
You said I was a gift
With no BUTs and IFs
You gave me name
And that stays the same
I face life without fears
'Cause I'm with you for so many years
I learned many things
In which life brings
You are always there
You show me that you care
Through thick and thin,
To you I always lean
Thanks for everything
Because of you I can now do anything
Mom, thank you
For being my inspiration.
For being my role model.
For being my guardian.
And now I'm taking this chance to say,
You mean every little thing to me.
I love you.


© 2010 maryjaneuy


Author's Note

maryjaneuy
Another work of mine. Hope you like it. :)

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WOW... great poem.. If only everybody loved there Mum half as much, the world would be a better place.. Fantastic poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow, beautiful. I really like it, it is nice to write your feelings down in a poem and its about mother. You saw mine which is for my mother, thanks for reading it. Well done !

Posted 14 Years Ago


Poem is beautiful. A wise person know to be thankful for a mother's love. Poem was well written with a story of love and kindness. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great write! the emotion just weeps from the page on this one.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love you....
Very touching....sincere...
I like it...

Posted 14 Years Ago


Thank you so much guys for your kind reviews. I do appreciate it. :)
I'm happy that you like it. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


i don't like it, I love it....ah,just superb
a tribute to all mom's
twas emotional and deep..
loved it immensely

Posted 14 Years Ago


you mean every little thing to me...great line! and sentiment.
excellent work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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awwww... my mom would love to read this and then tell me that "look how much she appreciates her mother" :P haha.. All moms do that I suppose .. But I love this.. && yes, mom I love you too

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice piece........beautifully written. Sends me into flashback of my brother's birth :) sweeeeet

Posted 14 Years Ago



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maryjaneuy
maryjaneuy

Muntinlupa City, Philippines



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