Possibly/Someday

 

Something ought to be written in this space

Of that I’m fairly unsure

Impulsive indecisiveness tells me that

With all and nothing to take from this

My fingertips slip past missed opportunities

 

 

 

My idiocy knows few bounds

That is for certain, I think

Lack of conclusion is just about

The solitary summation I can draw

Possibly someday is not what I want

It is only my deepest wish

Reviews

[James Jason Dye]

Well I wrote a pretty long paragraph about how and why I like this piece which was destroyed because the page couldn't be displayed. I sigh and say good poem. Happy easter!

This was originally a space containing nothing.

[Dice Rosenthal]

With all and nothing to take from this
My fingertips slip past missed opportunities "

These are the lines that stay with me, that make me pause, for some reason. Maybe it's the last like, the missed opportunities bit, since that's ever so present in my mind. I like that this poem is differnet from others i've read...like the person below me said, abstract. Oh, and the last lines, leave me thinking....
Good job = )

[{Angel Redd}[Formerly A..]

I love your style. It's a little abstract, interesting, but still meaningful.