Our Stars

Our Stars

A Poem by Mary Bradley
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Love in waiting

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Written it is in the book of heaven 
Our fates will collide 
Our loves will be intertwine .
But ... Life itself carried us on a different path .
Gazing and mesmerizing upon the sky above 
Each piled up dreams and desires ,
To be with the one , 
The other half of the star .
That make whole of our created star .
Which shine brighter when we are one .
Someday .
Til then ...
We keep searching and gazing on each other star . 

© 2015 Mary Bradley


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Fantastic. I loved every single line of this poem. The way you started this one was really good - "Written it is in the book of heaven
Our fates will collide
Our loves will be intertwine ." . Beautiful.
loved the optimism in this one. Made me smile. :)


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you The LostMind for your review :-) I appreciate it



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A collision of love between two individuals can create a universe in and of itself. This is another gentle write full of wonder from you Mary. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you Christhoper Casper ... glad you think so :-)
Fantastic. I loved every single line of this poem. The way you started this one was really good - "Written it is in the book of heaven
Our fates will collide
Our loves will be intertwine ." . Beautiful.
loved the optimism in this one. Made me smile. :)


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you The LostMind for your review :-) I appreciate it
Each night I gaze upon the stars
Shining brightly in the sky
May they never burn out
May our love never die

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Beautiful words Leviathus Fortes
when those stars collide, hopefully there will be love.
and it will be fabulous...and shine through several galaxies...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you :-)
A most crafted and elegant piece, quite simple yet a powerful thought, collision to bring together emotion, well done, good read.

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Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you Thomas Fitzgerald for your review . I appreciate your kind words :-)
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wow a beautiful written poem...... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much for checking it out , I appreciate it
This is romantic and I love the feeling of the poem...well done my friend!

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Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you A.Amos
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Two halves coming together to become one whole, shining being...just amazing. I believe that everyone has their true love out there waiting, it's just a matter of time and not giving up in love. Looking forward to more nice pieces of writing like this, Mary!

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Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you Tks for your nice words . I appreciate your review . ... yes I believe it as well , someda.. read more
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Now, if there was a map
to guide me to your half star,
my angels- hurry! aide me!
need to find my other half... :)
Really nice poem dear Mary :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you Moonskittles :-) ... wish I know where this 'map' is . LOL
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9 Years Ago

Hehehehe true that.
Hey Mary,

Well done! I love the figure of speech you chose to emphasize in your poem. :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Hi Lavender Soya ,
Congrats for your new badge !
Like always thank you for your review .. read more
Lavender Soya

9 Years Ago

Ditto! I saw you had a new badge too. Oh, don't mention it! I always enjoy reading your works. :-) H.. read more

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Added on January 31, 2015
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Mary Bradley
Mary Bradley

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