Would you

Would you always be the one I turn to

Would you show me your dreams

take my hand and tell me your thoughts

would you cry on my shoulder

tell me when your afraid

 

Would you share your happiness with me

dance with me in the rain

would you lean on me when your weak

let me be your friend

 

Would you comfort me when I cry

hold me till it's better

would you always stay the same

never ever change

 

Would you be my hero

save me from my thoughts

would you help me through darkness

never leave my side

Reviews

[Lily Finch]

waoOOOO love it

[Adri Moolman]

hahaha thanks so much

[Baby Ricochet]

Nicely written.

[Adri Moolman]

thank you

[Keith LaFountaine]

Great job, poignantly written. I would only suggest that you add punctuation marks at the end of your lines (first 2 lines should end with a question mark, etc etc)

[Adri Moolman]

thank you

[Stella Armour]

all the questions we ask, sometimes silently as thoughts, he would be your hero if you could find a guy to say "yes"...

[Adri Moolman]

definitely

[AlexValkyrie]

Wonderfully written. Good job.

[Adri Moolman]

thank you

[NITHIN PURPLE]

would you.....

[whitefang311]

Nice poem and yes you can always count on me

[Adri Moolman]

aw thx

[quinfinn]

of course, you realize, you are dealing with a man who would do all these things and more for the right woman...i would. question is, can you find a man who would be all these things for you? i have written these very thoughts before, although you have penned them beautifully...it is a common malady among we humans, that desire to be cared for, loved, cherished and adored...so few are willing to be everything to someone else. sad indeed. loved this write.... i thought of that song,"hero" by enrique iglesias...reading this.

[Adri Moolman]

I thought about that song while writing this.. Thank you

[quinfinn]

you're welcome.