Starry Eyes

Circa 2010

will you breathe for me

let your heart pound for me

my palms are facing up

and reaching out

I'd wear your heart like jewelry

close to my own

and if your heart is fragile

I can handle it with care

will you trust in me

I won't let you down

I'll be waiting

for that first inhale

and with starry eyes

you'll exhale and look deep inside of me

then I'll know

your heart is mine to keep 

Reviews

[mcceewrites]

These words evoke so much emotion in me! And that's what good writing should do. Thanks for sharing, I think this is one of my favorite poems so far.

[mel]

Awe thank you so much! It's always so rewarding when someone new can enjoy my work! Thanks again!