Mistress Sea

Going home.....

The temperate waters beckon

Entice as any woman can

 

To hold me

Tenderly enfold me

In her saltiness

 

She arouses every sense

Fingers caress every open pore

 

Embracing me, taking me deeper

And deeper

Into her icy womb

 

Soft seas silence

Another body floats

Drifting on noonday tide

 

Home at last

Quiet now

Just the lapping of her waves.

Reviews

[Corset]

drowning in the sea, drifting bodies, icy wombs, death by Titanic, has anyone ever considered the poor iceburg? Can you imagine, you are just drifting along minding your own business and WHAM! Some big a*s boat comes out of nowhere and side swipes yourself, hey buddy! watch where you're going! You'd think being all way out here in "when hell freezes over" it would put the odds of being blind sided at low risk...but nooooooooooooooooooooooo, here comes along the unsinkable climbing up my grill! wtf...?!? Better get that damn geiko lizard a damn parka!

[linear]

You're really quite crazy......but I like u anyway.....thankyou for looking in :O)

[Corset]

Yes I am... they all thought Columbus was crazy, crazy like a fox, when he figured out the world was round. (was that really him, who discovered? I thought there was some dispute about that?)

[linear]

Long long ago it was written that the earth was round and Hung upon nothing........biblical.........but the science of the day prevailed, the earth was flat and was balanced upon the back of a turtle that swam in the cosmos etc.....

[Corset]

nothing less than a perspective :) gravity always wins.

[frivolous treasures]

Melancholic wistfulness that just flows over your words and stanzas in gentle waves. don't let be unsaid that the waves tease the shore with her sweet taste. I love this.

[Brenda Keach Bradley]

oh now this bring to mind sailing ships and death at sea.....yes u can see it all in your words....again a very good job my friend.