Valentine Thoughts.

Valentine Thoughts.

A Poem by shadrach hah
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The first write in my Valentine's Collection. 2022. A Sonnet.

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1 ….. Valentine Thoughts.


A super crown sings of dreams in the night, 

may love’s words touch your heart with deepest love, 

love’s journey shall ever be a delight, 

our passion shall sing in the star’s above.


Passions and desires are gently flowing, 

let this sonnet of love forever progress, 

forever in glory, you are glowing, 

in the joys of love we find tenderness.


Sing of moments divine in love’s own scene, 

imparting visions only seen in dream, 

in a mind where love is ever the queen, 

together we shall dance in a moonbeam.


As visions of love flow within my mind,  I see the beauty of my queen of kind.

© 2021 shadrach hah


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Isn't it ironic what we say in our poetry is so hard to put a voice to in person?

Poets write it better than saying it.
So I would just walk up to her and say, "Here, I wrote this for you" and then run. I'd be too scared of her reaction. I don't think you would need to be, Mike.
j.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shadrach hah

1 Week Ago

Hi Jacob, I agree with you that it is hard to say in public what we put into our poetry. At least, i.. read more



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Now I get it. And I'm awash in the love of your words!

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shadrach hah

4 Days Ago

Hi William, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. Love is .. read more
Loving your Valentine's thoughts. So beautifully expressed here and in sonnet form as well. Very nicely penned Mike. All the best.

Chris

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shadrach hah

1 Week Ago

Hi Chris, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so gl.. read more
Isn't it ironic what we say in our poetry is so hard to put a voice to in person?

Poets write it better than saying it.
So I would just walk up to her and say, "Here, I wrote this for you" and then run. I'd be too scared of her reaction. I don't think you would need to be, Mike.
j.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shadrach hah

1 Week Ago

Hi Jacob, I agree with you that it is hard to say in public what we put into our poetry. At least, i.. read more
A very nicely written sonnet. It shows a deep reverence and passion for love. Excellent work Shadrach.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shadrach hah

1 Week Ago

Hi Carlos, thank you for dropping by and the review on this first write in my Valentine's Collection.. read more
Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

1 Week Ago

I too have struggled with sonnet writing as well so I totally understand how you feel, Mike. I respe.. read more
Gorgeous, a sonnet in homage of love, of poetry and dream, I love that it's a new collection from You and obviously it's gonna be just beautiful, I love it more that they are sonnets, like little sweet songs of love, sonnets are perfect for Valentine You chose the perfect form dear Mike. Thank You for keep sharing your romantic pen and loving heart with us all... now You make it so exciting for the upcoming months :>

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shadrach hah

1 Week Ago

Hi Gounwah, thank you for dropping by and the review on this write, it is much appreciated. I always.. read more
I love your gracefully flowing words, which reflect the flowing heart of your message. I love how you tackle the testy sonnet effortlessly. But to be starting your VALENTINE COLLECTION already is total flim-flam. I mean, I can wait until the last week in September to launch our Halloween explosion. I'm just afraid this onslaught of romantic sentimentality may dilute the airwaves away from my raunchy rowdy mojo *heh! heh! heh!* Think of all the juicy hearts that will be sluicing from your pen between now & February. I may need more marijuana (((HUGS)))

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shadrach hah

1 Week Ago

Hi, My friend, nothing could turn the river from your raunchy rowdy mojo. I have to start early for .. read more

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Added on November 22, 2021
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shadrach hah
shadrach hah

Cowdenbeath, Fife, United Kingdom



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I am a would-be poet who likes to let the heart sing as it chooses. There is always romance in the air. more..

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