Alone As One

self adjustment

Alone As One

 

To break the shackles of humanities grasp

Wandering through time transfixed with space

The days processing halted for dignities sake

Untwisted vacuum emptied designed to deface

 

Finally at one thoughts become my own

Mind complete racing full of the expectation

No longer influenced pounded by myth

Freedom of expression for now is a must

 

Like a blank canvass that all painters possess

All thoughts then materialized with imaginary brush

Mind simply creates images in which to digress

To attain peace and clarity grasping at life even death

 

Weights lifted unshackled continuously streaming

Thoughts wander some stay some whittled away

Existence now matters exhausted drowned with emotion

Communication elaboration quickly maintained

 

Must rest seek shelter diminish the flame

All mayhem confusion to drown in next day

Ability to resume from where it all ceased

The reasons I enjoy being alone my mind complete

Reviews

[Carolann Dowsett]

It nice to be able to break away from the world and all its chaos and just 'Be" for a while, in your own space with your own thought. That's peace and freedom.

[minisla]

It's my favourite time. No distractions. Thanks Carolann.

[Tom]

Powerful self-descriptive lines in this poem, makes me think of the need to break away from the rat-race and have some quality time to ones-self! Chill time is the more commonly used term I believed?

Top write, enjoyed this !

[minisla]

Glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate your comments.

[Sami Khalil]

A marvelous write. All good ...Thank you for sharing...:)

[minisla]

Thank you for taking the time to read it. Appreciate the comments and glad you enjoyed it.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[zainul]

Wonderful write.
Enjoyed the piece.
My favorite line is 'Freedom of expression for now is a must'

[minisla]

Thank you I'm only getting to grips with this poetry malarky thing. So far so good.

[zainul]

You are most welcome.
I love your efforts :)

[Freedom's Child]

I like the flow with this piece, you have to read it slow which is perfect for the overcasting emotion. Good imagery, my favorite line is "Untwisted vacuum emptied designed to deface" very vivid. Good work!

[minisla]

Thanks for reading glad you enjoyed it

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Wow, this poem is so outstanding, amazing and emotional. I like this.
100/100

[minisla]

Thanks I appreciate it