Emotions of the world

Emotions of the world

A Poem by Mintwhiskers

Wind starts to stir the storm

Autum leaves spin endlessly

Clouds crash together creating echoing rumbles

Sun dissapears as the dark overcomes

Rain drizzles down pouring like sliver tears

The rain is the tears of the world and it is followed in anger

Light flashing reflecting off windows

It light is like it angerness

The world's temper tantrum is rolling on

As it slackens it calming down

It stops happy once again

The sweet smell welcomes the people out again

Splashing puddles, growing grass

 

© 2008 Mintwhiskers


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Yes it is a niceway to start a story lol

Posted 15 Years Ago


T.T you are really gifted for writing, everything of yours I've read displays whatever emotion you want it to, whatever message you want it to, or bring the reader into a world of your creation, keep it up, your writing is beautiful.

Posted 15 Years Ago


i like this poem. i dont think it is as good as some of ur other riting but i still really liked it. man this review is only giving me 1 point. not that that is y im riting this...... nevermind. good poem!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on July 12, 2008

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