Starry visitors

Twilight sky show stars above

Twinkling like vanished souls

Reflect upon the silver lake

They dance in the sky causing ripples to effect

They watch their loves ones as they begin to weep

Drip Drop now their is dew

Children step out to gave above

They remember their love ones as their toes touch their tears

 

 

Reviews

[Arsenic]

This is some great work. Absolutely brilliant. I loved this poem.

[Beatrice Mars]

I love the stars.

Favourite Line:
They dance in the sky causing ripples to effect

I love this poem, well done!

[Tuff Stuff]

It's really good. Wonderful even!
:)

[lots fo love ♥]

that is one of the best poems u have written!