The day

The day

A Poem by Mintwhiskers

I felt like a fairy that day

it was like my back sprouted wings

I could fly high

through the center of clouds

and swing upon the stars

things were passing as a blur

as everything was changing

but just because it was changing doesn't mean it was bad

the pond was clearer

the glass was now half full

the day you told me you loved me back

© 2009 Mintwhiskers


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I like this. So happy!
You write very well my friend.
Please keep up the good work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


OMGG (OH MY GOSH GOLLIES) I STOLE THAT FROM LAUREN ANYWHO I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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